That was what started me on my journey to writing Mist on the Meadow. I was driving to work one cold winter day and passed a meadow when a stag stepped out of the woods. He paused, and I could see his breath in the air. He was beautiful, the moment was perfect. You can never get those moments back. But how do you write a story about one moment? And so I began to gather moments. Originally, there were going to be several different types of these moments in the story, until I settled on just that one, magic moment.
Some of the scenes that have touched me:
The first snowfall over a ridge of pine trees.
Sunbeans filtering through the trees.
Mist/fog over the moor.
Clouds banking over the mountaintops.
The sea lapping against the beach.
The sea lapping against the beach.
Snow falling, a bonfire on the common, the silence was so crystal clear, then out of the darkness came a horse drawn sleigh and all you could hear was the clopping of their hooves and the ringing of the bells on their harnesses (one of my friends lent me that one).
Have you encountered a moment of grace? A few seconds when God opens a window to show you something beautiful in the world around you that you might normally take for granted?
If I would take more quiet time instead of always having a TV, music going or some sort of noise, I might be fortunate enough to have moments like that. The writing you just presented was beautiful and I dearly loved the photo.
ReplyDeleteI suppose I look for those moments - the one that always strikes me is the sun filtering through the trees, like God shining a light down to say hello. Thanks for the kind words, Mario's mom.
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